Myth

Moslem is spelled Muslim. Both of the spellings is correct, Muslim is more common though. :)

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Indigo = Quote Black = Review * Part III Fen drifted from foot to foot silently in the emptiness of an unrecognisable street, the ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Part II The Heat of the day seemed to linger quite far into the evening, but this was probably just ...

Trident : Thanks, I hate the typos *kills typos*

I prefer to watch Poirot and Miss Marple on TV. I've only ever read one AC book and I can't remember the title, sorry.

I'm sorry I don't have a critique (yet) but I think you need to rate your work if you're using the 'F' word.

miyaviloves : Thanks for taking the time to read :D

Wow! That chapter was fabulous! I haven’t critiqued it as well as I usually do. I can really feel the tension between Karenna and Shanna and the connection shared by ...

The trees begins to dance begins = begin That's all. Nice poem and you didn't seem to add colours of autumn as other poets tend to do.

Very annoying and yet I've told a similar story to keep myself from dying of boredom.

You could always ask a teacher for extra classes/books to help or your parents.

Claudette : I believe she had been eight-and-twenty at that time. I just had to compliment you on that, perfect! Beautiful. Thank God someone noticed that! I've often seen 'Mr/Miss/Mrs' ...

Green = Comment/Correction Black = Review * The next day, near the end of their class with Jataal, the battle mage asked Tannar to say after. ‘say after’ = stay ...

Bookebrithil : Thanks for reading, I'm glad I was able to create the world and not have too much 'info dump'. If you have any other comments I'll appreciate your ...

Perhaps it would be better to post as a blog entry, all that hyperness.