Myth

I love Dostoyevsky! It took me about a week to read C&P and I got my own copy *treasures her book*

Shafter : Thanks! That tree sentence has been edited XD 'aforesaid' was about the mage because I just mentioned them and didn't want to use 'mage' again. I've never read ...

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Oh... Sorry! Not bad. The main chaacter seems very obsessive compulsive... she should be fun to play with later. Thanks. Obsessive...? I didn't realise. Does anyone else think the same? ...

Green = Comment/Correction Indigo = Quote Black = Review * “I am not one to avoid the obvious, so let me just say that your behavior last night impressed me, ...

OK that was a quick reply. :P Thanks for looking it over, Wiggy.

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Headmaster Tavrinal sat bent over a few sheets of parchment, his feathered quill scratching as he wrote. Gry, you know ...

Green = Comment/Correction Black = Review * I looked up; studying the cliffs curiously, as I painfully walked towards them and ignored the course sand that caught between my toes. ...

Green = Comment/Correction Black = Review * Henry beside him exert confidence, as always, and seem un-affected by Archie’s fidgeting. Add –ed at the end of ‘exert’ and ‘seem’. “This,” ...

Thanks for the critique! You're one of my favorite critiquers and I always look forward to your posts when you read my stuff. Wow! That just made my day :D ...

Always a pleasure =) Keep me updated.

I've been known to catch the little things. :D And cake? Chocolate is my favourite. * Green = Comment/Correction Black = Review * Chapter Two The main light in the ...

Gry : Yay! I love it when critics point out the little things, I always seem to miss them out when it comes to my writing. * sited = placed ...

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Aero : Ack. This is the first time I've ever tried getting readers to sympathise the narrator/MC and I guess it worked :D I like Emily, she's baaaad and I ...