Myth

flick of the sweat Off I really thought this was going to be an actually door like a gate to another world or teleporter but it turns out to be ...

IT was night. Typo: it The carrier was on a bridge, being carried by ten bulky men. Isabel cringed every time they took a quick step on her bridge for ...

The underground city reminds me of The Edge Chronicles where the scholars live in tunnels because they've been force to live underground. The Grandma scares me a little with her ...

Mersey and Delzette, we don't get a clear idea of them. You could have a conversation going on between them before they actually break up. I wasn't sure who they ...

He placed his neck key into a the lock on the chain , it vanished leaving a powder that fell to the floor. Just a typo, take out the first ...

I don't usually critique(sp?) but I liked this. It was nice and short. My favourite part is: I have not light enough, nor strength enough, nor fixédness enough to shine; ...

I was a little confused with the time changing but I liked the idea of the switch. I thought this would more of Historial subject more than Action/Adventure. Although you ...

I've read and watched LOTR and it isn't so great as most fans make it out to be and Harry Potter just doesn't interest me. I only read them and ...

Gosh, I don't think I'll read it in one day. I'll post my review each time I finish a part. To start with I like the first part. Dragon’s powerful ...

I agree with Sam about the pace of the story. It was good but you should add more decription and maybe tell the reader more about the other women (both ...