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Re: Masquerade chapter 1 part A
It seems pretty interesting! A girl becomes a princess, but doesn't want to. A question: what era is this set in? Or is it a universe you've created? Some grammatical ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: In the Shadows
Hi angels! I really have no knowledge of how to nit-pick poems, but I can say this: I thought it was brilliant! It was more than "all right", no matter ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: My Only Sunshine ch. 2
I'm sorry to tell you that I can't offer much assistance in reviewing this one. I was just too drawn in by the story to notice any mistakes! (Or perhaps ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: My Only Sunshine ch. 1
Hi, nice to meet you! Your story really drew me in, and I loved Lucy and Izzy's personalities. I just caught one little slip (that I think I'm correct on, ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
I'm sorry if I'm not of much help in my critique. Haha. Anyway, I found it to be a very captivating story. Although I've always found it annoying when people ...
Feb 16, 2009
