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Hello, darling! I'll review overall for prologue and chapter 1 and edit grammar for chapter one [since everyone else did the prologue.] :) [s]My throat was so dry with all ...

Hiya! I hadn't noticed there was a preface. :oops: I'll review this now. I'm here to do grammar and overall for you, Kat, buddy. :) [To quote "The Dark Knight"] ...

Hiya! I'm here to edit grammar and give my opinions on said poem. :) Suddenly , I fell . [s]d[/s]Darkness came over me like a black blanket . It suffocated ...

Hey, Tennis! Here's my critique: :) Daddy - where are you? It feels like hours outside the grubby outlet mall , singing in collosal snowbanks Natasa and I . [s]i[/s] ...

It’s the servant[s]’[/s]s ' quarters that mean something to me. The kitchen, the shed, the solarium, the attic. Places where I grew up, learning about real life and how to ...

Evi, darling! Nice to review for you. One step closer to that 75 reviews by March 16th goal, eh? Hehe. Anyway, I'm not the most wonderful critic of poetry. *blushes* ...

Hiya, Delphinater! I have to say I enjoyed the song! I thought it was quirky, funny, and cute. A couple nit-picks: 1. Where's the punctuation after each line? It was ...

Hiya! While this is repetitive, I love it. I think the rhyme scheme is very nice, and although it does leave a question, you meant to do that so the ...

Hi, Mimi! Here as requested! Maeve shivered as the wet grass beneath her bare feet brushed against her ankles. The sunlight was being blocked out by the surrounding trees , ...

Hi, Kat! *hugs* I saw her again. She spent her day at the same room. This time, she sat at the wooden floor, her back against a corner ; her ...

Dr. Grounder? Hi, you might not remember me, I’m Susanne Germaine. From the family reunion? Yes, yes, Robert’s cousin. The reunion was a swell experience, wasn’t it ? Meeting all ...

As I walked past , I saw people ' s hands fly to their face and whisper to their friends. I wanted to yell at them , "W hy are ...

Hi, Shini! I loved this poem [like your other poems. You're a very good poet! Haha.] Anyway, I'm not familiar with schemes or anything but I liked however this was ...

I've finally gotten a chance to sit down and review this! Sorry it took me so long. :) When summer nights grew longer, crisper , and warm days shortened their ...

Hi, Shini. I have to say I loved this poem. I didn't find any grammatical errors (I hope I didn't miss any; I'd feel bad.) I thought the rhyme scheme ...