Muse

I think it's good, but yeah, expand a little. Maybe even just one more line to give it that finish it needs. Good start, just needs a bit of editing!

I love the last stanza, It really hits you. I love the concept, and you wrote it well. Great job, don't change anything! Well done xx

Smashing. Don't change a thing. *two thumbs up* You manage to make things flow so smoothly, which i constantly have trouble with. hmph. great work, as usual.

I like it, but, i think a longer version would maybe be better. Good subject choice, I also think about this. Good work :D !