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Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 4)
Hello Erika! I was gone a few days but I'm back for my review on your fourth chapter! Loooved the descriptions and setting on this chapter. You could have added ...
Sep 15, 2016 -
Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 3)
Hello Erika! Here to review while I sip my tea today. Loooved this chapter! So many developments! Well construed, good structure, vocabulary, punctuation. Well done! I missed a little more ...
Sep 9, 2016 -
Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 2)
Hi Erika! I reviewed your first chapter yesterday and I must say that I was intrigued to know what followed. This second chapter was so much better than the first! ...
Sep 6, 2016 -
Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 1)
Hello Erika Hale, I seldom leave reviews. But I'm quite intrigued by your story. Strong start, well developed charaters. Loved the ending! Continue on this well construed path. However, I ...
Sep 6, 2016