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Re: The Boat
Sup Playah, Lemme get my fo'shizzle awn, and then proceed to review your poetry. "Faraway" is that meant to be "Far Away"? "I'm waiting for horizon" It just seems akward ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: The Last Human on Planet Earth- #3
Okay, here we go. Pastor Malcolm Preached on the events which recently had captured so much attention. “Most of you have probably already heard that the United Nations DNA Research ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Always Stick Together Chapter 1
Sup! I'm going to do my reviewing thingy now... [I tip toe into our six year old brothers room to try my hand at getting him up. Switching off his ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Dreamland--moved to new section
I have some issues with loyalty. Leading with a full name introduction never gets my rooting juices going. I always feel that authors should worry less about what their characters ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: Holes and Pieces
Heartfelt, if not simplistic. Did manself forget to capitalize the last "I"? Without trying to sound like a parade-pisser-onner, the fragmented style (though bold!) hindered my otherwise enthusiastic
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: Of darkness and ducks
A crushing blow to pessamists everywhere! I once wrote a similar poem in the margins of my Philosophy textbook entitled "Ode to the Duck Gentleman" which championed our feathered friends ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: The Point of Life
Poetry is just as much about the delivery than the words. All good poetry stands up to being read aloud, it's literature with more drama than structure (As a brute ...
Nov 3, 2011
