MrMuddyPig

Thanks for your review! I will fix my tenses.

You welcome.

Thanks for your review!

Thanks for your review, the reason he made a deal with Luke is because he's cool.

Thanks for your review, the reason he made a deal with Luke is because he's cool.

I know what you mean about how "forgo" rhymes, but I still thing it should be spelled right and that you should find another way about it rhyming.

Thanks for your review!

Thanks for your reply! I will make the next chapter longer.

I will Fix my mistakes next chapter and thanks for liking my plot twist!

I am sorry with the "pls", but the "pls" was not part of the story, just a comment I wrote before the story. Thanks for your review, Next chapter , ...

Thanks, I just want to tell you that I think of my story as I write, that why the math part there, next chapter I will focus on the tracks.

Thanks!

Thanks for your comment, I will put more details next chapter!

This is funny and its allmost like iIam in the action, I also like how you give your charcters personalities. Also I like the drastic things in this story. And ...

Good story. I like it.