Morrigan

Thanks! Did this edit make it any better?

I like your concept and your juxtaposition. Nice job.

Thanks for the advice! I'll take it into consideration. :)

Thank you! :)

^_^ Well, it certainly helped, so thanks!

*coughs* better? ^_^

AW BRO CONGRATS ON THE PUBLISH GOOD JOB

GURL YOU HIT THE NAIL ON THE HEAD THANK YOU the narrator is the fitting room attendant, so yes, the sales clerk.

Thanks for the review! I actually chose to leave out capitals because it tends to give it a more melancholy tone. If you want to read more about it, you ...

Eh, I thought it would be more exciting, like it translating directly to something less than savory. Like "dogs" or "pigs" or something.

It's not a hopeless cause! Every poem has potential to be great. You have a great concept here. It's just the execution that needs some work. And if you notice, ...

Nice imagery! I would leave a review, but everything I wanted to say was already said! You definitely got a like out of me.

Wow, I haven't really seen a work that represents non-binary characters in the poetry department before! Yay for representation!

Thank you for the review. This was written in fifteen minutes, and it was mostly a practicey type thing, but I will certainly try to add something more. Thanks again! ...

Gosh dang, girl! A ! As you said, there is no wrong interpretation of the poem. Honestly, I didn't mean to put all that symbolism in there, but I can ...