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Re: Limbo
I was thinking about that, actually, the fact that trees make sound when they sit there, rustling or whispering, but I wanted to preserve the feeling of dormancy, of lifelessness, ...
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: Limbo
*coughs* is this better? ^-^
Mar 15, 2015 -
Re: Limbo
Thank you for your thoughts!
Mar 15, 2015 -
Re: Eternally Yours
Because this is categorized under short story, I assumed that it was a short story, rather than a descriptive piece. No, it wasn't a polite way to say it was ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: Drinking Song No.4
Thanks! I always appreciate your critiques
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: Drinking Song No.4
*coughs* better? I literally can't remember writing this poem by the way.
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: Limited Connection
Thanks! This was really helpful!
Feb 23, 2015 -
Re: Edward Cullen is UGLY!
Hey, man, don't be hating on Robert Pattinson. He hates Twilight more than anyone else, and we shouldn't project the roles of characters onto the actor. Daniel Radcliffe is not ...
Feb 21, 2015 -
Re: Are You a Feminist?
Thanks for this. I swear I know how to write an essay, and I'm gonna be honest. This was written with little effort because I was fired up but also ...
Feb 16, 2015 -
Re: TFoA - Chapter 4 (Part 1 of 2) REVISED
Rosendorn has a point. Ninjas started their training at five.
Feb 16, 2015 -
Re: Are You a Feminist?
It made sense to you, I'm sure. However, saying we're all people is like seeing a house on fire and pouring water on the house next to it at the ...
Feb 16, 2015 -
Re: Cliches and Kisses
This is so beautiful that I'm in pain. "I like how your neck bows to an open book, and the reeds frown upon a pond how hair floats in the ...
Feb 16, 2015 -
Re: Are You a Feminist?
Is that better, Tenyo-san?
Feb 16, 2015 -
Re: Are You a Feminist?
The thing is, you're asking me to include bias. I'm trying to convince people that feminism isn't a dirty word, but passion is only going to alienate my audience. Also, ...
Feb 16, 2015 -
Re: Are You a Feminist?
I was totally aware of the generalisation, and I winced at it, but I wrote this for fun. Also, do you have any suggestions for how I should reword that ...
Feb 16, 2015
