Morrigan

Reading this again, it's even more powerful. Still love this.

Please remind me to review this.

Thank you so much, Pingu.

Does this look better to you?

Thank you so much, Pingu, this is exactly what I needed.

Thanks for your feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Oh, something I forgot to mention. I think you should do away with the roman numerals because you don't really need them all that much. A stanza break would create ...

Oh, this is about the Missouri river, not the state. :) I live in Nebraska

Thank you for your thoughts! We actually have devised since I posted this a little, and we took into account the boy's reaction after the waxing, so he doesn't actually ...

Thanks! :)

Thank you for your thoughts. I'll look over it for patches of roughness.

I think you're missing the main point of my review.

Pingu, I know this was literally a year ago, but I was reading through past reviews and realized that I never explained to you that the throwing up was literal ...

If it was a joke poem, then why wasn't it categorized under humor? And forgive me for miswording-- yes, on the surface, there is something to interpret, but there is ...

Thanks!