Morrigan

Thanks. I think the last part is for the reader to decide.

Honestly, if you're still explaining things in chapter eight, your world is probably extremely complex, and you should probably try to make it more similar to the world we live ...

Thanks, dude. It's been a while since I read that. Like, eight years.

You can place it in a different category, @pancakeandwaffle , by setting the options for the work. To get to that place, you should click "edit," then "publish," then "set ...

You did say that there was a part two. I don't see the point of you beating a dead horse, though. Have a good night.

Thanks, Rydia! I guess I didn't convey enough damage of the house only by saying the floor is caving in. I think it's more personal as well because the house ...

Thanks; I'm glad you liked it.

I was inspired by an actual abandoned house, which is two doors down from my own. There was an actual buzzard sitting on the chimney, and it made me think ...

You're welcome x6 lol

Hi, PaperNessa! Have you ever heard of prose poetry? Prose poetry is written like prose, in paragraphs rather than verse, but contains the characteristics of poetry, such as poetic meter, ...

Do you think these edits improved it? :)

What do you think of these edits?

*comments on this so you remember to review it later* c:

Thanks, Aley

Hello, Doctor-- thanks for making a home visit! Thanks for your thoughts. They are helpful. I do have one thing to ask, though. Personally, I think that the hypersexualization of ...