Morrigan

Hello, wesman16! Welcome to YWS! I've come to review your poem! I quite like the narrative that this tells: the story of someone entranced by a beautiful yet fleeting person. ...

Hello, Gravity. First of all, I think we've all been there. Waiting for something good to happen to us because we've been told over and over that god is good ...

Hello! I've come to review! So I can't say this was exactly gripping for me because I actually really have no clue what this is about. The stanzas feel disconnected, ...

Are you sure you're not a god? This is divine. I can't really criticize this very much, but as we all know, I'm a sucker for imagery. Though this has ...

Hello, Deanie! I've come out of my nest to review! *breaks out old study bible* Wow, I haven't opened this thing in years! First of all, I was raised by ...

Hello, starfire. I'm not quite sure why this is posted in the short story section. It looks like it's formatted more like a poem. Perhaps you should move it to ...

Hello, Harrug! Since you have so few reviews on this, I thought I'd give you a nice long one. So there are two stories here, from what I'm reading. We ...

Hello, catherine! Welcome to YWS! First of all, I really enjoyed reading this. It has a nice feel to it, and you stick to the truth in the characters in ...

Hi, ReisePiecey! Oh, this was lovely. I understand the feeling here, and I really appreciate that the haiku has done you no wrong, especially with the break after ellipse. That ...

Hi, rhia! This ended so well. I love the end of it with the wasp stings and the tobacco. Just lovely. That being said, there are a few things that ...

Hello, queerelves! I appreciate this poem and what it stands for. That being said, I think the execution could use a little tweaking. You could use more/different examples of inanimate ...

Hey there, mastergrieves. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. If you're going to use a rhyme scheme in this poem, I suggest you make it consistent. ...

Hello, BlueAfrica! I'm here to rescue your work from the green room! I have read several other chapters of The Book Man , and I have enjoyed them all immensely. ...

Hi there! I'm here to rescue your work from the green room! First of all, I really enjoyed this, even though vampires are one of my least favorite subjects to ...

Hello, DeepCrystal! I'm here to rescue your chapter from the Green Room! While I haven't read any other chapters, I was able to figure out what was going on, which ...