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This is an awesome poem. It really shows another view on death that we barely get to see. I love your metaphor at the end, and just the whole entire ...

Wow. It sounded like slam poetry to me. I had a rhythm going for a while, but then it seemed to lose it as it went on, which was kinda ...

I liked this a lot! I can't really find any faults with it at all. It turned out marvelously, and your use of language was perfect in just the right ...

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

Thank you for that. I'm glad you said it like that!

Aw! Thanks!

Thank you for the criticisms! This has been an end product for a while, but I may go back and edit it. I had actually originally written this to include ...

This is very bittersweet. I like how you pose the hope against the sadness of things like your "father's goodbye". I like how personal this poem is. Sometimes it's really ...

That was really amazing. My favorite part was ... and all of those maggots had my name because he’d always said that I would destroy him, and he was always ...

And by different, they meant pieces curse words. I think you left out a word here. This story was very creepy. The thought of a world in which words have ...

Thank you!

I know how you feel. This is just so outrageous. I'm offended by the whole thing. I just wish that Zimmerman could be put behind bars and that racism could ...

Beautiful imagery! I loved the natural elements in this poem!

It needs a little proofreading, but I really like this one.

I really like the emotion in this. It makes me feel sad. I feel palpable despair coming out of this.