Morivou

You go in and out of complete and incomplete sentences almost like nothing. I don't like this because there is no SENSE (lol) of continuity. Let me explain... every time ...

I thought the originality that might come from the childish point of view did not exist. When writing this kind of poem, you should rely less on the words and ...

I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. It reminded me greatly of some of your student-produced-written-directed-composed-performed plays/mini-musicals at our school. We call them Black-boxes and they deal w