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Re: Peace in Solitude
This is really good! Just a few things I have comments on: First, The pain of loss love perhaps? Do you mean lost love? If not, then I recommend some ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: Catching His Eye
I really like this poem. I think it is very moving. (But perhaps that is just because I relate to it.) I didn't really notice the words themselves much as ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: untitled book - Chapter 1- The Heir and the Questioner
Just a couple of things: The other two were Luke and Katie Blake, two of his most devoted followers. They had done many a great deed for him. Katie was ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter One (rated 12+ for fantasy and violence)
I really enjoyed this! I must compliment you on how quickly you draw the reader in. I would like to read more and find out why Darrell is supposed to ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: my own world chapter 1
I really like the concept of this story. However, I'm not quite sure of what the conflict is. Are you going to elaborate more on the conflict in a later ...
Jan 18, 2010