MoonlitSlumber

Alright, Mags! Last one! iii "pressing forty dollars into my palm, shrugging off hospital bills" I'm confused by this whole section because i have alot going on and too much ...

Ok now time for ii This one's gonna be short. "She perched on His chair" his chair? who's chair? And I like how you capitalize 'His' and 'She' as if ...

Me again, maggie! I'm gonna do this in parts. first off, part i. "my father asked for a moment of silence, thanks before a meal flavored" A moment of silence... ...

Hey, magpie! Let's do this. "The happiest moment is in the silence." I love the irony of this line. Usually Silence indicates tension or some other unpleasant emotion. "Dark aroma ...

First off, wow! Fellow Homestuck here! Alright, let's rock! "spinning atoms and an absentminded dedication to nuclear theory" I think you've captured her interest in science here and also her ...

Hey, Wey! Let us begin. First off i would like to say, your vocabulary is divine. This poem is very unique, but not too captivating. It certainly is interesting, but ...