MoonlightForest

Thank you! I appreciate your honest review. I was just practicing some of my daily writing and had finally gathered up enough points to post something-- I'm sort of what ...

Thank you!!! This was the result of me writing through free association, so there's not really any objective other than for me to put words down on the page. I ...

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you found it interesting and I'll be developing a story later on :)

Thank you! :) I really appreciate the review!

Wow, thank you so much! :)

Thanks for the helpful suggestions and the kind praise ! :) I really appreciate it!

I agree that it does sound a little bit "infodumpy", but I really think it enhances your mc and the reader's understanding of him. The sense I get from the ...

Thank you so, so much! :) I will definitely take your advice, and if you ever want a review I'd be happy to return the favor!

Wow, thank you so much! That really means a lot to me, and I'll be happy to check out any of your works! :)

Thank you so, so much! The edits you gave me were super helpful and I'll be sure to make a few changes. I'll be continuing the story for sure, hopefully ...

Thank you so, so much! The edits you gave me were super helpful and I'll be sure to make a few changes. I'll be continuing the story for sure, hopefully ...

Oh, okay, sorry. Good luck on your story.

You're welcome! :) I'm always happy to review

That is so kind, thank you very much! :) Stay tuned in, I'm hoping to post a full chapter every couple of weeks. I'd be happy to read some of ...

Thank you! :) As for the word "keeled", it actually means "to collapse", which I thought perfectly fits the mc's situation. Your suggestions were very helpful, and I'm really glad ...