MoonTitanZan

Great! Your expository stretches are very well done. Your writing's very easy to read and I realy enjoyed this piece. Your dialogue could use a bit of colour and you ...

That was amazing. I don't know how to give that a review, nor do i have time, but I assure you I've never read anything quite like that. Absolutely astounding. ...

Well said. Your poem took me to another place. I loved it very much. The only things I want to comment on is to point out some of the things ...

Wonderful. The poem is lacking rhythm, but I rather enjoy poems that establish that they don't have a strict rhythm. My only suggestion is changing "...catacomb of mystical confusion." The ...

Short and simple for most of it. Wonderfully pieced together. I enjoy your writing style and I admire you for being able to write something so small and simple. In ...

Zan here. I must say. Wow. What a wonderful read, I enjoyed this poem so much. It was very light, even though it wasn't a gleeful topic. To start, I ...

Very nice. Over all, I really enjoyed the simpleness of the poem. Now I don't mean to say it wasn't intelligent or thoughful or thought-provoking. It was all those. But ...

Great! That was hilarious, thank you. That made my day. I'm still quite new on the site and am busy ALL the time, so i haven't even been able to ...

This is very well done. I'm impressed at how well-rounded everything is and you have talent at using words in a flowing fashion. I'd like to point out three spots ...