MoonIris

Hi! I really enjoyed this story. It has nice characters with great personality. My favorite one would be Nora. What was you favorite character while creating them? I'm really curious ...

Also I hope you had a great time until now on YWS!

Hi, thank you for the review. I'll take care of those grammar mistakes soon. I want to bring more details about the main character in the next chapters.I wanted to ...

Thank you for the comment! I know I focused only on how truth can be negative. I don't think truth is always bad but I know a lot of people ...

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Hi! I'm glad that you liked the poem! It's important to me when my poems "are speaking" to someone. You know what is the best think if you imagine and ...

Hi! Thanks for the review. So the weird way the stanzas are is actually something my computer does. I try to make equal spaces so it looks like a poem ...

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Hey! I'm not that good with rhymes so I prefer not to add them, but I do have a poem with some and I want to try adding to others ...

I'm glad you liked it and thank you for the review! :)

Hi! Thank you for pointing out the mistakes. I did had a random capitalization because I also had stanzas. I'll try to fix that in order to make it better. ...

Thank you for the review! I'll make the changes you suggested. Originally I also had stanzas but for some reason they aren't anymore. Do you know how I could make ...

Hi Harper! I'm glad you got inspired from this poem! This is a great review, it's much better then my first one! I know the story of Peter Pan from ...

Hi! Hope you're great! It's a really beautiful poem and as far as I saw it's your first one on YWS, congrats! I liked the fact that you show us ...

Thank you for the review. I'll make the changes for the repetition. I hope you have an exiting day!