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Re: The Balloon Man
Thank you so much for the suggestions!
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: The Balloon Man
Thanks for the very helpful tidbits!
Jul 3, 2015 - Re: EYEronic Jun 30, 2015
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Re: Alien with Ivory
Some line edits: The infant, being [delete "being"] pushed in a stroller, asked his companion, [colon instead of comma] "Are you sure this disguise is working? Humans are staring." The ...
Jun 30, 2015 -
Re: The Balloon Man
Thank you for your suggestions! Do you have any specific places that I could improve?
Jun 30, 2015