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Hi there defyingravity! I have a review for you here. Instead of going into the nitty gritty I feel there are more general issues with this poem that command some ...

You're welcome. Honestly, this piece was a pleasure to read and I HAD to review it. Happy writing! :)

I'm glad you enjoyed it Citrus. Thanks for commenting again! :)

I do agree with the usage of the word case. I think it was originally shell so I may change it back to make it more clear. Keen is this ...

Thanks so much, you're so sweet :)

Hi Magpie :) Any feedback is welcome no matter how much or little is given; so I just wanted to say your comments are still very much appreciated by me, ...

Thanks for taking your time to review/reply! For sure the poem does need work on it's punctuation. For the most part, punctuation or lack of in this case is normally ...

Sestinas use the same end words in each line of the first stanza and repeat them throughout. For example the last word of the last line in stanza 1 will ...

You picked up on how the form compliments the meaning really well, so thank you for taking the time to think about that! Really appreciate that you took time to ...

Thank you so much! :)

Hi Temi, Thank you for your comment. I do agree with pale slightly, though pallidness would do the same job. It is however very clunky and probably wouldn't fit in ...

Hi KissMe, This poem is a sonnet. And not all poems must be broken into stanzas. I'd argue that can go against flow rather than with it; stanzas are rooms ...

Thanks to you three for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I know a few people would prefer to see it broken up, but the fact of the ...

double post, sorry.

Hi! And originally it was supposed to be divided into stanzas, 6 lines long. How the poem began to progress prevented that, however. And who says poem has to be ...