Monakeya

I liked it , it was very intersting in the beginning I didn't really understand I thought the man's name was the man and red was the creature who told ...

I loved it in the beginning you spelled best friends wrong but whatever this should totally be a book gold star for you very good it was a good story ...

At first i thought it really didn't make sense but then it started getting interesting u should make it much much longer it was good you had good grammar you ...

I like everything in this poem it brings such a powerful message about always being there for your friens which is really sweet ummm.. also this poem shudd b pg13 ...

[quote="dancingclouds"]The Dance Your simple, white dress Floats in and out As you twirl with your dance partner Your delicate face, shifts slightly to form a small smile Sending a tiny ...

it is a nice poem a lot of imagery and feeling good work but u shudd say the lad i mean if it's about u it shudd b in another ...

Aww that is absolutely Beautiful great detail imagery metaphor everything it's amazing and plus i actually understand it ..................................................................... very good

"It’s not the easiest thing in the world You’ve been betrayed in a way A way that makes you feel like you have no emotions" that part in the beginning ...

that's exactly the way i feel no one understands me this poem speaks fo real fo real this time good job 5 gold stars for u keep on writing grl ...

It's a cute poem I like it and I want a cat too but that this should be in the lyric poetry section but above all it's actually good i"ll ...

OMG tat makes me cry and very greatful that my mom doesn't abuse me wow i hope you continue it misfit-writer it's me from french clubur play is super good ...

I like your writing the type of writing where two bFFs fall inlove and turn into bf gf i love those kind of stories the beginnaing was great especially tat ...