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thanks i didn't even know it posted but hey, I didn't have much to add. I really appreciate everything and I'm glad you liked it

Thanks for the critique. I am aware that it is cliche and childish and I apologize if you didn't enjoy it. When I thought of the idea for this book, ...

Thanks for the critique. I am aware that it is cliche and childish and I apologize if you didn't enjoy it. When I thought of the idea for this book, ...

That's really funny. Kind of weird and the ending was really funny. And at last people get how awful and sexist people are, especially towards women and there "titties".

I can't wait to read the second part. I kinda figured you wouldn't say f me. Heck you dont know who I am. But yeah I'm super psyched for the ...

thanks. I have absolutely no idea what happens next so that will be fun. thanks for the criticism. :D

thanks. i did notice a few of those errors when i reread it but i was typing it at midnight so i missed those at the time

yay thanks

thanks it was a big help :D

this is really god. why are you thinking about that though? i kinda feel the same way yet at the same time i'm slightly dubious. i don't understand why "The ...