MoIIylouise

I've never read that book, I might try to find it and read it. Thanks for the review.

Thank you, I'll change it soon

Thank you:)

Thank you:)

It was, I must have missed it when I checked through it. Glazed over as in like when you go into a daydream and your eyes look funny, it's hard ...

You're welcome (:

Thank you! It helped a lot. I'll fix the stanza thing when I'm on a laptop next. Thanks again.

Thank you.

Oops, I must have missed that when editing. Sorry. I'll change it tomorrow. Aw, thank you!

Thank you for the review. I think I'm going to organise it into stanzas again. I had it in stanzas but when I've transferred it from word they've been taken ...

You're welcome, I'm happy to have helped spot that c:

You are actually the first person to guess it that way round. I'm going to sort out the dialogue so it's less choppy. Thank you:)

This poem put a smile on my face. It's strange, funny and unique. I can honestly say, I have never read anything like that. You must be the first person ...

Aw, thank you.

Thank you, I will try to make the speech clearer.