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Hi, it's me, Mo. Here as requested. First, before I start, I justr wanted to say that I loved it!! :D Kenzie sat at her window, staring out at the ...

Hi, it's Mo. here as requested! It was a great feeling. Love, an amazing chemical reaction in the brain was happening to him after many years.Lovely feelings in your brain ...

Hello! Here's my review! :D Key: Bold = Words I've added Strikeout = words that should be deleted italics = doesn't make a whole lot of sense I paused, hand ...

Hello!!! K, here's my review. Key: Bold = words I've added in Strikeout = words that aren't necessary Italic = Words or phrases that don't make sense Have you ever ...

Hello, I'm Mo. and I'll be the first person to review this. :D Here goes. Look to the west and you will spot a lonely shack high on the hills ...

I really like this! xD The only thing I found was that I got a bit confused when you swapped between past and present - maybe it's just me though. ...

'Ello, just read the first one and could not stop laughing, and now you I see you have written a piece equally amazing! Great work! xD Just one thing I ...

This is so, so funny. I could not stop laughing. You seriously did make me lol!!! xD Great work! I'm in a not picky mood right now so no proper ...

Hi! I'm Mo and I'll be reviewing your peice :D This guy, I fell in love, I cannot have. This sentence doesnt really make that much sense. Maybe; This guy ...

Cool. I really liked this - especially the twin bit (just thought I'd mention I'm a twin). I think you should make it a bit more obvious that Warren and ...

Hey, I'm Mo! :D Here's my review. Hi there, my name is Eric. I've been asked to share one of my adventures with you so I chose this one: I ...

Hey Jess, Here's my review. "Enough of this crap. If I didn't want to be in school, I wouldn't have came ," This should be come (otherwise it sounds like ...

I love it! A few errors here and there, but it's late so I'm not going to nit-pick through it. If I remember I may tomorrow do a proper review. ...

Okay, I'm your twin so I'm going to be mean :D I'm sitting on the curb in the rain drinking a bottle of vodka. I like this opening line, it ...

Hi, I'm Mo and here's my review. My alarm clock wakes me up the next morning. I roll to my side and look at the time. Great, it's six-fifteen. I ...