Mjdwrite

Thank you! I am trying to come up with a real plot and some conflicts and then I will know what I really want to do for attention grabbers. Thank ...

Thank you! I will rework it when I get a chance and edit it here! Thank you again!

Thanks! I tend to hear and see everything in my head but not everyone sees that. That is why I started on YWS, so I could know what others were ...

I wish I could understand poetry enough to give you a proper critique, unfortunately, I am unskilled in that particular field and feel I would offend you if I tried! ...

Oh, and I was confused at the very beginning when you said the footsteps were slapping, I personally would have used catching up or stomping or something of the sort.

Hello there! Mjd here to give you a legitimate review over your prologue. I really liked the concept, the title, and the basic storyline for this piece. The whole thing ...