Misty

*laughs* Haha. I was totally feeling "white girl eminem" in this, without the vulgarities and wifebeaters and whatnot. I was saying it in my head and rocking out to the ...

Wow. get off my fucking couch You really started off this poem strong, and it stayed strong throughout. The use of profanity when, at times can seem to strong, was ...

Ahhh...I liked this. I haven't got much to say by way of critique, except that, the rhythm was constantly off (read through it slowly) and at first you had a ...

I don’t need therapy, I need to therapy myself. Question: what is the world’s obsession with labels? Why is it that we feel we need to label ourselves and others ...

THINGS YOU DID WELL In a way, Regan wasn’t lost at all. EXCELLENT way to start off the story! PERFECTOMUNDO, even. Very professional. Very enthralling. Draws me in quickly. V. ...

Actually, I liked this. But that's just because I'm a huge Georgia Nicholson fan. Obsessive, you might say...HOWEVER, and ON THE OTHER FOOT... THINGS THAT COULD USE A SECOND LOOK ...

It was predestined, a fairy tale gone faulty. Ahh...your words are so good. It's practically poetic. "Dazzling delinquent" an "mysterious mystic." It's lovely. "hasty hands," added to the mix, and ...

Awwww, brad is so sweeeet. :P that wasn't helpful. I should say something helpful. Let me think...AH YES! I've discovered your rhyme scheme in the first stanza! Excellent!

It is a nice short story, and now that MH has done EVERYTHING, my review seems almost unnecessary. But I'll post it in any case. Hard on it? Oh magic, ...

Who does need friends, really? Lol--I prefer #2 pencils myself though. As always, if you have any questions or comments PM me.:) THINGS YOU DID WELL “What are you doing ...

Need help, eh? Good! That’s what we’re here for! Okay, Sam has been (desperately) trying to teach me to critique, so I'll try this new method of hers... THINGS YOU ...

As I have already given you my most thorough critiques of this (i.e. This is great! Keep it up! no, only joking), I should just like to say that I ...

Ah...brilliant. The ending sort of tied it all together,didn't it? I would love to comment profusely and make this deep and meaningful but there is a cassorole waiting for me ...

Toki,” he said trying it out. “Why’d you look away, Toki? I loved looking at your eyes. They’re a very pretty blue.” CHEESY ALERT. BAd enough that you're over-clicheying Hunky, ...

Oh! there are too many good things in this to even single out. The "razor thin lips" and symbolism in the water, and the callous conversations about screwing guys ten ...