Misty

SAMANTHA!!!! what a great poem. I read it and thought of steeples, and of our favorite poet, who is labeled anonymous? but whose name is allison harvard (: (: the ...

you know how much, ah, j'adore (eeeergh) your stories. I think they're some of the best I've every read, but, that is nothing new. I've thought that since tenth grade ...

I liked this darling. It was very easy to read. It had a pleasant flow, and it was sad. Yet one is forced to wonder what the man behind the ...

hi hi!

"She giggled a ghostly whisper that slithered down the halls, And haunted the decaying matter of the empty walls." exnay the word "empty." seriously, besides the mass repitition of the ...

mmm, this is very typically emo. you have some good things going for you though---the format for instance, is lovely. and the flow is pretty nice. but come on sweetiepie, ...

How fabulous. I love scraps, as it were. Sorry if this review feels like spare bits. It goes with your pretty poem. the first bit reminded me of crystal night....gosh, ...

sweetiepie! the trouble with trying to define "yellow" in that it sort of only has one definition, and beyond that, you can't mess with it. so the trouble is, when ...

Hey kiddo! of course I had to read this because it's titled Slaughter-Man. I love slaughter, and I love men, so clearly this was all set up to be a ...

Wow. That was intents, like a ten person tent. :// Well, let's talk about positives first: I read this because I absolutely blow when it comes to short stories, and ...

What a fantastically post-modern story. This might be one of the best pieces I've ever read on this website. It's so amazing because I understand what he means when he ...

cloves and ginger? that is an indescribably delicious smell! without doing anything more than say one simple, yet exotic scent, you've given us an original peek into the girl's past. ...

So, turning east, the bird, though lacking truth, into the window flew This is awkwardly phrased. Redo? Other than that, I enjoyed it. It was unique, which was the goal ...

Hey! Good concept for a poem! I especially like the last line, and wish the rest of the poem were more like it. You need to work on your punctuation ...

Startlingly fresh and original. Also, hilarious. I'm surprised that you were able to hold my attention through the whole piece (it's a high compliment). You're obviously a very gifted (and ...