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  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Changed

    Hey there! I'm here for a review! :) First of all...wow. That was good. I really felt the emotion behind the words, and the pacing of the story was decent ...

    Dec 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Vixen

    Hey there! Here is my review! :D Oh, and welcome to YWS! I see you're thirteen, and I'm actually thirteen too! It's great to find other people my age on ...

    Aug 24, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: The Witch of Berwick Mountain!

    Hi there! :D Here is my review for you! First of all, this story was quite good. For this being one of your first stories you've ever written, I think ...

    Aug 24, 2014
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Supernatural Re: A Ringmaster and His Lady

    Hello there! :D Well, first of all, I think this was a phenomenal poem and definitely could be turned into something bigger. I did not find any grammar or spelling ...

    Aug 24, 2014


You got rid of them. Yes, that's just like you. Getting rid of everything unpleasant instead of learning to put up with it.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World