MissSarahElizabeth

It thought this a very thoughtful piece. I liked it. However, some words could be a bit more descriptive and just an overall better choice in language. This was also ...

Good job. I really liked this. You have great images which jump out and grab you. :) A couple of things though: You say "sings" where it almost seems as ...

I liked it, but what did you end up failing to see? You never say it. You also use the word "see" twice. It had great rhythm though, and I ...