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Re: Prologue - the ending is a new beginning
Tysm for this review!
Jan 29, 2023 -
Re: The accidental magic: chapter one
Grammar: Try being more aware of commas and their rules, as well as linking words as some sentence beginnings just get slammed into the readers face with no warning, making ...
Jan 25, 2023 -
Re: Be wary of those around you
I like the mysterious vibe and the 1st person perspective, it makes us readers wonder who is talking/telling us this. This wondering is perfect to intrigue readers and let their ...
Jan 25, 2023 -
Re: Prologue - the ending is a new beginning
This is what I call constructive well written feedback, thank you so much for this!
Jan 25, 2023