MissPhoenix

Thank you again Icy for another great review! I'll keep in mind everything you've mentioned for the final part :)

Hey Icy, thanks for your review! I agree completely with these comments and definitely keep the whole character-development aspect in mind :D

Thank you for this review! I completely agree with the points you make and I'll try to work on them for future writing :D

Thank you MJ for this brilliant review! I'll keep all of these points in mind, especially the frog one XD

Thank you Thundahguy! These are some great comments and I'll keep them in mind for the next chapter :D

Thank you so much Elliot for such an extensive review! There are some excellent ideas here and I'll keep these points in mind for future writing! :)

Wow Queenie! This was a really good poem- really clever idea and concise sentences... you should do more of these! :D -MP

No problem! :)

Hey Rinos! I'd love to talk more about the story :D I'm really excited to hear what ideas you have!

Hey longoreo thanks for your response! It's true that I've been rather reluctant when writing the comedy aspects as it is my first comedy writing on YWS. The synopsis is ...

Hey sorry for not replying earlier but thank you for this amazing response! I feel so flattered hahaha. I will hopefully continue with the story sometime this week :)

Hey Ronald559 sorry for not getting back earlier but thank you for this review. I do agree with some of your points and you expressed a lot of ideas I ...

Hey Satira sorry I haven't got back earlier but thank you for this amazing review! I completely agree with your points- some of the information I put in wasn't necessary, ...

Thank you for your response- this was so great for me to read! I'll have another go at the parts I messed up but thank you also for your support ...

Hey thank you so much for such a long response- everything you said made sense and it was really nice to hear things I could improve on (i've no idea ...