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Re: Regime 91 (Chapter #1 & Part #1)
Hey Alyssa- I'd love to commend you on this excellent first (part of a) story. I think I saw somewhere in the description that you wanted to have your stories ...
Jul 14, 2017 -
Re: The Rings(chapter#1/ Part #1)
Hey Rinos! I really enjoyed this piece, especially how this chapter acted as a prologue of sorts- are you thinking of taking it further? I actually have some questions about ...
Jul 14, 2017 -
Re: of strangers and the moon
Hey Arathorth this is an amazing poem! It's so sweet and I love the way you make everything flow so well. I know you aren't really supposed to start a ...
Nov 3, 2015 -
Re: The New World
Hi ConcernedGreek this story was pretty amazing! I really liked your descriptions and the ending seemed to fit very well. I thought the beginning was very good, especially at capturing ...
Nov 2, 2015 -
Re: Down In The Design Dumps
Hiya- I really loved this story! You capture human voices so well- I'm not sure if it was intended to be satirical but you really gave the characters personality. In ...
Oct 26, 2015 -
Re: Atlantic Emerald
Hey I loved this story you're really good at writing descriptions! I especially liked the part where you put "Inside the ship, audible gasps were heard over the radio. It ...
Oct 26, 2015
