MissMorose

I've heard people say things about my punctuation, but, guys, my intention was to create emphasis and a rhythm. Just look at Lord Byron! I'm not even one millionth of ...

I'd be VERY happy too if people can put in their comparisons of the book, their critiques and what they would have written differently PS Who thinks the whole baby/unnaturally ...

We'll see is he does come...*winks*...or not. He is with his King after all.

Thanks alot Sadie! Your advice was really good, and I'll edit ASAP. Also, I'm working on the first chapter, so I hope you'll look it over too! PS. Sean isn't ...

NB-This is my first post, and when this storyline came to me late at night, and I had to write it down! The plot should become more apparent later. Please ...