MissMiaFacinelli

Why do people always end with "Keep writing?" LOL! Thanks for all your comments guys. And it's meant to be "at me" because when someone talks TO you they "connect" ...

Thanks! =] I take it you like Twilight???? And I know what you mean about those lines they are very long.and I get what everyone is saying about the punctuation.

Thanks, sorry I don't mean to be harsh, it's just all my friends thought it was good. And thanks for understanding it's not meant to rhyme.

It's not meant to rhyme!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And it makes no sense with all the commas. And all the people I know who read it said they loved it. If you read ...

Cool! I agree with Shinigamizm about the rhyme scheme-it's only really obvious in Verse 1. This is because most rhyme schemes go ABCB not ABAC. Apart from that, a good ...

It was kinda bad and I got influenced my things around me-it's fatal. It was kinda bad and only like, 12 A4 pages. I have one now that's finished, called ...

The Rain Who am I? I am the rain I beat down steadily Day and night I rush along gutters I gargle down drains I drip off roofs Because I ...

Sorry, lol

I really like the first person nature of this poem!!! It's so true and it makes the wind sound so fed up! Yes, I know I'm reviewing my own poem ...

Will someone please post a reply????????????/