-
Re: Battlefields Eulogy
Even though you lost me at the end when you said it was 2010 whenat the beging you said the solider was wounded in I 1930 something I think. It's ...
Nov 30, 2009 -
Re: Luminescence: Part Eight (Read Below) - A Twilight Fanfic
OK, I'm not bumping, this is just easier than posting in the main segment. I HAVE FOUND AN AIMEE! OK, so my friend and I were discussing how Luminescence would ...
Nov 15, 2009 -
Re: The Question
LOL! OK, I seriously lolled at this. However, it's not really a poem. Maybe you could put it in your signature? Mia x
Nov 15, 2009 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
My first book I ever wrote. It was horrendous, really, very bad. However I hear the writer is very good looking so that makes up for it. XD XD omg ...
Nov 13, 2009 -
Re: Luminescence: Part Eight (Read Below) - A Twilight Fanfic
Hey fans! So, I need an opinion... Should I write a special Christmas piece for, well, Christmas? It would be entitled "Black Ice" with a slightly obvious topic, and it ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: Luminescence: Part Eight (Read Below) - A Twilight Fanfic
Good point... I might explain that in a bit. Maybe she should have given up? It's intended to be that he's been depressed for a while... I'm still working on ...
Nov 7, 2009 -
Re: The Vampires Story Prolouge
Please. Pleasepleaseplease! Before posting, please spellcheck! The word Prologue is spelt how I put it! Sorry, I'm a weensy bit of a stickler for spelling and grammar, and spelling errors ...
Nov 3, 2009 -
Re: Luminescence: Part Two - A Twilight Fanfic
And, I also noticed that Edward for some reason started liking her after he attacked her. Why? What caused this drastic change? Maybe add a bit more description about that. ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: Luminescence: Part One - A Twilight Fanfic [POLL]
Sorry about the left and left thing. It's edited out on my edited manuscript. I have broken up the paragraphs in my edited manuscript too! And Edward's father is also ...
Oct 20, 2009 -
Re: Luminescence: Part Seven - A Twilight Fanfic
OK fans! (especially AlphaGirl01 and Addawen19) To clarify the whole Alice-getting-a-gift bit: Jasper tells Alice he has a gift for her Alice "sees" the gift in her future Aimee wipes ...
Oct 16, 2009 -
Re: Edward Cullen
Please keep the fantastic reviews coming: I read them all, and they are really helping me with my work! Thanks!
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Friends And Enemies
OK. Thanks for the review! Please keep them coming - they are really helping me improve! Pgsgirl
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Luminescence: Part Seven - A Twilight Fanfic
It reminds him too much of the past: of his life as a human. Although he was happy, he thought his family were all dead and buried, and he had ...
Oct 3, 2009 -
Re: Luminescence: Part Seven - A Twilight Fanfic
Don't worry! I know what you mean. I felt they should be slightly more protective of her as she is actually the youngest (Forever sixteen. Blerg) and as Edward has ...
Oct 2, 2009 -
Re: Luminescence: Part Seven - A Twilight Fanfic
I didn't like seeing Carlisle or Esme like that at all, it was to much. OK. What do you mean by "seeing them like that"? Like what? And too has ...
Sep 28, 2009
