MissGangamash

I wanted this story to showcase how being a jester has had a negative effect on how Wallace sees himself and puts a wall between him and everyone else. He's ...

Thank you! Hope you enjoy the story, and if you check it out please leave reviews so I know what you think :D

It's funny you say Wallace is being less neurotic in this chapter when I think he's possibly worse XD Just shows he's just never a calm individual haha. I get ...

Thank you! Some people don't take my constructive criticism well so it's nice to know someone appreciates in and I am helping :)

There are some moments later on that touch on Kaspar's thoughts when him and Wallace first got together. Wallace is hyperaware of how unstable his relationship with Kaspar is - ...

Glad the rest of the chapter makes the beginning make sense! Wallace likes to chatter and try and cover everything with humour so when he's not speaking, that's when you ...

Glad you like the transition into the flashback in this one, I know it's a bit different but you're right, this one is present Wallace catching you up on a ...

I didn't want Delphine to be painted as a villain because like you said, she's just as much a victim. And as much as Wallace may be a little envious ...

Cool! You should mention that in the chapter otherwise it doesn%u2019t really make sense.

Hello! Yes, this flashback does come in a different way than the rest but this is Wallace writing it down basically like a diary/journal so I wanted it to read ...

When I was writing this I didn't actually realise how much Lady Delphine was mentioned and yet the readers still hadn't met her haha. I wanted to give the impression ...

Wallace is very much a person out the outside of everything, even his own life at times. I think that can be quite a relatable thing - there are lots ...

Hello! Thank you for taking the time to jump into this chapter even though you haven't read the others! I'll check out those run-on sentences. It's funny thinking you had ...

Dont know if I read the tone wrong but this was kinda rude. Even from just reading one chapter I should be able to picture what is going on in ...

There is definitely an undercurrent of foreboding now throughout the novel. I'm glad you can see the slight shift in tension and in Wallace's narrative. He is caught between feeling ...