MissGangamash

This is definitely one of the more simple chapters of the book :P I didn't even realise there was strong language in this chapter XD I just sort of skim ...

Oooh good point about the metal, I'll add that in. Thank you! Damn it! So close! But of course one mistake had to go under my radar -.- Hmm...a few ...

It's up to you about the title :) It is rather vague but I didn't know if that was intentional or not.

Haha, thank you so much :') I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Awh, thank you so much! Sadly there isn't a sequel =/ I was pondering over the idea but I just think it'd ruin it. This is supposed to be vague ...

Hmm... you could do something about sexuality? That's a topic that people tend to have drastically different views on. But it's also a touchy subject so I'd understand if you ...

I'm so glad you liked it ^_^ And it's probably one of the best chapters because Nico isn't in it XD People seem to have a problem with his character... ...

Gah! I editted this twice too XD Well, one can never get tired of compliments ;) Haha. I'll keep that in mind about Evie's thoughts but I guess I am ...

Thank you! I don't think there is going to be a part two. I played with the idea but I think I like it just how it is. I want ...

Thank you so much! Jewellery is spelt right :) I think there's an English and an American way of spelling it. I'm pretty sure I'm not doing a continuation of ...

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :D It's nothing like anything I've written before so I didn't really know what people would make of it. Yay! Someone ...

No problem :D I'll sort those edits out soon. Thanks for pointing them out! Evie shoved Nico out of the way to show that she was on his side, but ...

It's supposed to be vague so it leaves you questioning :) The point is that the narrator knows (or thinks she knows) about 'him', but it's still a mystery to ...

Gah! What are you guys doing to me?! Now I'm really tempted to continue it but I have no idea how! Even I don't know what his secret is XD ...

Thank you so much :D Sadly, this has no continuation. I left it open for your own interpretation and make you ask questions. I had thought about making it a ...