MissGangamash

I guess everyone interprets books different though. People pick up on different things. That's the joy of reading :) So I'm not too worried about it.

She was very conflicted but Caius is still present in her mind. Obviusly he wasn't the ONLY thing because, hell, she's just turned human and that is a pretty big ...

This is where the story starts focusing on Evie and Caius. It was focused on throughout the previous chapters too. Evie's main concern when she was in the basement was ...

But any suggestions are welcome :)

He's not completely dropped. He comes back in later on but he's not a central character, he doesn't carry the plot. He's a side character. There are four (arguable five) ...

Thanks for pointing out the errors. I'll be sorting them out soon :) Nico is supposed to be dropped (for now). The chase would not be news worthy really. They ...

Thank you! I'll sort out those typo's soon :) I'm glad you liked this chapter because not much happened in it, it was just to focus on Caius and Evie ...

Thank you so much! I completely agree with the whole vampire thing, they've seemed to have turned into sexy pansies since Twilight came about. But they're not supposed to be! ...

Hello again! Yeah, I've been busy with work so I haven't got round to sorting out the grammar stuff yet. It is an odd chapter, I know =/ It's because ...

It's okay, glad you're here now :) Evie literally did have something up her sleeve ;) Haha. I think the plan worked so well is because she played on Nico's ...

I only edited this twice so I figured there'd be a few mistakes =/ Ah well, more coins for you! haha. Nico is actually a massive dumbass, he just thinks ...

I guess it's just different reading something like this, which is being uploaded every few weeks than if you were reading it as a book. Because as a book, that ...

Thank you! I'll have a look over it again, thanks for pointing that out :)

Thank you so much! I'll look over it again and try to figure out those tweaks :P And who doesn't love vampires?! Haha

In Chapter 9 it was mentioned. Caius said, "Be careful. Don't put yourself in danger because of me', to which Evie replied, 'You're my Maker'. The simplicity of the answer ...