MissGangamash

You did do a god job with conveying the shame but I couldn't help thinking, if you have to think about all of that stuff everyday, surely there was a ...

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much you're considering reading from the start, that means a lot :) In this story, the vampires cry blood so ...

It's okay! You're here now ^_^ Yay, less editing! Woo! Haha. Alexander put Caius in a suit because he looked good in it (and Alexander wanted him to look fiiiiiiiiine) ...

Thank you so much! Yeah, I wanted her to be a real vampire but also to have people sympathise with her. It's not her fault :( I'm glad you enjoyed ...

Thank you so much for the detailed review! Evie never uses her vampire strength in her job as a bouncer but uses her other vampire skills that are less obvious. ...

You didn't seem cold but I do prefer a bit of a deeper feedback than just correcting paragraphs etc. I understand that you couldn't really because you didn't know the ...

Thanks for your improvements, I'll look over this chapter :)

I'm glad Caius' re-appearance wasn't too obvious. Ah yes, much tension in the house but luckily Varsee is civil! Tehehe, I do love Alexander's one-liners ^_^ Thanks for the review!

Progeny: a descendant or the descendants of a person, animal, or plant; offspring. Haha yes, it was a very imaginative title. I think it works anyhow :P I will definitely ...

She may have...she may have not... ;D Yes! My vampires are real vampires! None of that Twilight bull. I'm glad you liked this chapter :D And I'm hoping maybe you'll ...

Yesss, less errors! Maybe I'm getting the hang of this editing thing XD I'm glad you're connecting to the newbies :D Ahh yes, things seem to be repeating themselves a ...

Most of my characters are based physically on actors because I find it easier to picture them and describe them when I have something to work with. Alex, in my ...

This is no Twilight! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter and I'm hoping it's enticed you enough to read on...or back if you haven't read the previous chapters. Evie has ...

Happy review day! I'll look over the chapter again as always and try to sort out what you've suggested. Some of the sentences you have picked up on were intentionally ...

Don't apologise, this is why I'm uploading this on here. I want to make it as best as I can before self-publishing :D The bit about Evie's running monologue...When I ...