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Re: The Progeny: Chapter 28
Glad you liked it :D I've uploaded all the 27 previous chapters of this, you can find them all listed on the righthand side. This is about halfway through the ...
Dec 15, 2015 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 26 & 27
Hello! Thanks for finally reviewing! Haha I'll sort out all those nit-picks, thanks for pointing them out! Chapter 26 was to focus on Evie and Caius rekindling their relationship and ...
Oct 10, 2015 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 26 & 27
Thanks for the very thorough review! I'll have a look over all your pointers :) The ending is not a test of love, it's a test of loyalty. You haven't ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: The Progeny (Prologue)
I'm glad you enjoyed it :D I do struggle with tenses so thanks for pointing that out. And Caius was referring to the girl when he said that it is ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 25
Thanks for the editing suggestions :D I'll have a look over them all. I understand that this chapter is a little slow but it's a chapter specifically for developing characters. ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Bad Seed (extract)
I'm going to sort of the thing with the times ^^ With first person narrators, she's narrating so her thoughts mix in well with her actions etc. She's basically thinking ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Bad Seed (extract)
I thought it was pretty obvious that it was AM seeing as though she's complaining that she has stuff to do and that she wants to go back to bed ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 25
No problem! As long as it's not me making you fall asleep :P I know it seemed a bit info dumpy for Alexander but as he said, the past is ...
Jul 1, 2015 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 25
Thank you :) They commented on another person's work and just copied this chapter as the review...
Jun 30, 2015 -
Re: Alien with Ivory
That's a chapter from my novel. Please report this person. She did the same to my work. Just copied and pasted my entry back to me.
Jun 30, 2015 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 25
How do I report it?
Jun 30, 2015 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 25
No, that't not a review. That's just copying and pasting the chapter. A review means you REVIEW the chapter, as in your thoughts on it. What was good, what wasn't, ...
Jun 29, 2015 -
Re: Dual Identity - Chapter 8
Whoops...wrong place XD
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Dual Identity - Chapter 8
Happy review day! This chapter had so much! I loved the part when the SWAT and FBI stormed the house, you knew a lot of the lingo which made it ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: The Progeny : Chapter 2
No problem! I wondered why you had suddenly just disappeared haha. Michael is only in this chapter but I'm glad you found him so interesting as to want to see ...
Jun 4, 2015