MiriamHannah

Thank you so much for all of the reviews, don't stop now. I've got a load of chapters up and I would appreciate your views on them. I'm slowly working ...

Chapter 2 The name 'Aryan' suggests white skin, perfect health and beauty, all of which the race possesses. A powerful dictator once described them as 'pure blooded' and so it ...

I'm worried that this chapter is not as good as the previous two, hope you like it. It is all building to something, I've just got to think what. Please ...

Again, I was trying to put off pulling this out until I'd had at least one more review so please review even if you don't have much to say. Can ...

Here it is, enjoy (hopefully) Chapter 5 Each carved stone, each wooden tree trunk is what makes this place ursine. Our land does not contain long blade straight motorways or ...

Thank you so much for the reviews, especially Luccy, ofir and pipiedooda. Please keep them going Chapter 6 Aryan City delights Although Aryan are not fond of tourists, at night ...

So this is actually chapter 8 part 1. See what you think.... Chapter 8 I sat still on the long green grass leaning against my oak tree. Watching each flower ...

Chapter 7 We had spent so long that night, just talking, just laughing. But she had to leave, go back to her family. I hated watching her walk back through ...

Sorry, I've been getting MAJOR writer's block, each paragraph has been a huge struggle but this is basically the build up to a major chapter 9. Look forward to it ...