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Hiyas! I'm Saphire! This was really good! It has a unique concept and very interesting. Since I couldn't find any errors that others spotted, I'll just do a quick overview ...

Hiyas, Jamie! I'm Saphire! :) This was really good. I was totally hooked and was completely scared for Annie. Oh, well... Here goes the critique! Annie Arballo stood knee deep ...

Hiyas! I'm Saphire and I'm here to critique your work! :) Well, it looks like everyone else has handled most of the work, so I'll just go over things like ...

Hiyas! I'm Saphire! :) This was great! I was totally hooked and I'm really eager to read more. I see that everyone else got to the editing part, so I'll ...

Hi! Sorry about the long wait, but with sickness comes no computer time and you know how that works out. ^-^ Anyway, to the review! I really liked this; I'd ...

Meep, this was awesome!!! I was totally hooked and I was really sad when I left the last words. Can't wait to read more. Now, on to the editing part ...

First of all, I love Percy Jackson and the Olympians! It's one of my favorite series and just really amazing. This was really good and really interesting. The grammar and ...

Wow. That was really good. The story had me hooked from the beginning and the cliffhanger at the end is pure torture! I can't really see anything wrong that the ...

Hi, anti-pop!!! I have to say this was a really enjoyable story. :) I can't seem to find anything wrong with it, but I have to agree with Haruno Sakura ...

There's nothing I can really add to this, though I didn't see any mistakes when I went through. ^-^ It was a really original and wonderful piece. I loved it! ...

Nice use of metaphors! And a really great story! It's so wonderful that the things closest around us can inspire us to create. :) It’s a black as the rest, ...

Haha. That was good. ^-^ I'm a lover of Twilight and was a little bit afraid to read, but I seriously liked it. The ending worked out really good and ...

Hi! I Saphire and I'm here to do a review! I'm a little new to the site, so I'll do my best. There's not much I can spot that is ...

I have to say I was totally impressed with that. The story was captivating from beginning to end and I had a hard time looking away for a second. The ...

Normally I wouldn't be one to like stuff like that, but I have to say it was hilarious! Didn't really see any grammatical errors, but I could have been too ...