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Re: Two women stood on the edge of the world, one laughing, one kneeling
hello! Appreciate the constructive criticism and feedback!
Jul 18 - Re: Prologue Apr 17
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Re: Prologue: Prime Target
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I really like how the prologue ends, and that some paragraphs were really powerful, and make me want to find out what happens later. Despite not having many dialogue tags, ... -
Re: Prologue: Prime Target
I really like how the prologue ends, and that some paragraphs were really powerful, and make me want to find out what happens later. Despite not having many dialogue tags, ...
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Re: Chapter 1 Crimson Hearts
Greetings! I really enjoyed this first chapter. It is very gripping and well-written, with minimal exposition yet managing to tell everything needed to be told. I also find the language ...
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Re: Road to the outside of world part 1
the rest of chapters are here , since my writing habit is almost-improvise alike , the chapters after ''Glass and bones'' are not the best out of them all (the ...
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Re: Road to the outside of world part 1
OMG i litterally forgot i had an account in here , thank you so much for the review! Thouhg myself isn't satasfied with some chapters i wrote (i forgot to ...
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Re: Road to the outside of world part 1
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Re: Road to the outside of world part 1
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