MilkNCookies

Sorry these are merely snippets of the main couple, Vascom and Adrianna, I've written the rest of the script but if you like this then I'll post the rest. It ...

Prologue "She is too powerful too exist in this world any longer." h H is icy breath froze in the ornate mirror. A message appeared in the condensated water. "I ...

I love this!!! There are only a few things to go over, though. 1) You say 'Jeremy' entirely too often. Since there is only one main character that you would ...

Hello. I am MilkNCookies, and I will be reviewing this fine poem for you. I can't see it. It. That's sort of vague. what about something like 'the fire crinkling ...

I'm sorry, but I have to... SHOW NOT TELL!!!! Now, the other thing is that the way the chapter ends, it feels like the middle of one. Maybe try with ...

Well, time for your review! Apple said to me once that writing was like sewing two pieces of cloth together. Well, you have nice stitch work. In a few places, ...

Hello! Like it or not, I'm reviewing! This Idoneus character is very strange. I can't figure it out. You talk about him like an enemy, but at the end it ...

Ww,I shall be your reviewer today! Now, isn't that exciting? First on the agenda, this was a short, sweet piece. It seemed more like a short-short story to me, but ...

Hammyhannerzthe2nd, can we just bury the hatchet? Please? I don't like fighting on amazing websites like this. Firstly, this is a very funny piece. i like the way the story ...

=0 nice story! I've never read the book, but just this seems nice. I didn't inclue the first part, since I couldn't find any nit-picks =D I'll let you see ...

He! That's funniez! I typed this with my friends as a joke! Comment please. Harry Potter was in the forbiden forest looking for his belowed Belowed? Do you mean bethrothed? ...

People usually drink wine with meals, Rosé, white or red regardless, Rose is a type of wine, right? I take a swig of poison, but don't take salt, but arsanic. ...

Ok. Sort of creepy, but a good poem none the less. Like the last reviewer, i didn't get the last stanza: Force me to eat your throbbing body. "Let's digest ...

Very emotional and moving. Here is my promised review! Silence, you hide more than words . Silence, you got me hanging, holding by a rope . Silence, stay there, stop ...

I'm here to critique! Your blue eyes sail on my rocky lips. rocky lips? Watching me as I speak. Dagger words slice my tongue as they leap from my throat, ...