MilkNCookies

Haha! This was awesome! I ususally copy:Paste it for nitpicks but I really can't find any. This was just awesome! One thing I think you could have gone more in-depth ...

“ Memorise Memorize the contours, the shape of the planets, how they form that almost perfect line . ” The beautiful women woman looked down at her daughter, as her ...

Hello, Dreamsingray! I am MilkNCookies, but you can call me Milk. And I will be reviewing your fine, short piece today. Fine for a minute, Pushed down again. I would ...

A single bullet is all that is needed to kill a man. As long as you have good aim, that is. This line confused me a bit. A lot of ...

~*~ The door is always open but only a crack, only enough to let in the gold. It will reflect off the bottles , the shards of happiness. The bruises ...

If You Saw the World How I Do, you would see that a single ice crystal, fallen from the sky, is a world on which I live upon. It melts ...

Reach out and touch me. I'm real. Grab a knife and cut me. I'll heal. There's proof I exist, Now you see. Before you make judgements jugments About me. This ...

Hey kathy. You know the drill- things that are corrections are in bold. Part 1: Stealing Grace It was the first day of their Senior Year. Jared Moore rushed to ...

This is pretty good, but sort of confusing. You use words my poor brain fails to comprehend. Why are you so smart? :D Anyways, I really liked this. I can't ...

Hm. Now I'm going to go read the novella! I'm puzzled whether I like this or not- I'm sort of on the bubble. Let's see how this plays out. Bold= ...

If I were you, I'd break it up into a ballad. It's a bit hard to read, but never the less I will review this fine poem. First Love By: ...

This has a bunch of potential, Annabella. I actually think this is well written, though I think it could be better in a poem. These are all things I would ...

Erm, this is... odd. Maybe not good odd, either. I didn't particularly like this, especially of the language it used. Let's see if we can child-proof this. Carnation milk is ...

Chapter 1 " d D o you hear that , Ben? " Maggie asks. " Hear what?" He replies. Maggie struggled to get up from her seat to show her ...

MNC, here to review (first)! Chance breakfasted and paid, Hey, I never knew breakfasted was a word! The ensuing hassle left Chance nearly hopping in impatience and myself (in the ...