MilesGrayson

Very interesting. I think this works really well as a Prologue. It grabbed my attention and makes me want to know more with very little text. It makes me ask ...

I'm not an expert on these things but I really liked your song/poem. It's really great, I can feel what you're trying to say in this. The rhymes made it ...

Hello Ractavia, I must say wow, this is a big leap from the last short story I read by you. The first paragraph is all choppy, with a lot of ...

Hello! I'm kinda new here but I thought I would comment, because everything helps. When I got to the end I was a bit confused, but after rereading it, it ...