Milaita

Wow, this looks fun. This looks to be the start of a very interesting story. I do encourage you to keep writing.

Ohmygosh, this was good. O.O Excuse my surprise. I may find many good works here, but this? This is like... I don't know what! It has so much suspense! I'm ...

I like it. I do, really! Hehe, I just want to say, that you absolutely must keep writing this! I'm pretty sure anyone who liked this will appreciate your doing ...

Wow, this is pretty good. If you are going to keep writing, do it! If not, I suggest you do. :P This really is good, it pretty much drew me ...

Such suspense. Quite lovely. Keep writing, I can't wait to read more. :)

I really like this. Might I say that your poem isn't as depressing as some of my poems? That's a good thing. :) But, anyway, this is really good.

Ah, I see that I have used my "solid wall of words" technique again. :/ Thank you for helping me. :) I shall surely use these teachings in future posts. ...

Thank you for your response. I will surely use what you have taught me in my future posts. :)

This is really interesting. I hope your planning to write further and make this longer. This is quite nice. It's very detailed. Please keep writing.

This is really good. I really do like it. Keep writing. :)

This is really good. I just looked over it at first, but when I got closer to the end, I decided to read it all. I like it a lot. ...

It's a novel. I want to get it published, but I do have to make corrections. :)

I agree with Thien. This work was very nice.

Oh right. I see what you mean. My writing seems to be quite childish. Though, that last sentence was most likely incorrect because of my ability to forget my punctuation ...